In the last two days I gave Jonas a lot of memories :
- A memory of snow, hills and a sleigh ride
- A memory of sunshine
- A memory of sunburn
- And I helped him to see the colour. ( He began to see the colour - red! )
First memories:
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The Giver's point of view :
I like Jonas. He is a diligent,conscientious, brave and clever boy. When I was a child I might have been similar to him. Also I like his curiosity and that he asks a lot. He trust me and teachable. I was very proud, when he came to me after he has seen beyond. He's able to combine memories and feelings very fast, although he actually doesn't know them.
But suddenly his questions are a little bit difficult and
Talea,
AntwortenLöschenIt's such a nice idea to not always tell the memories and the story from Jonas' point of view. I really enjoyed reading the Giver's thought and reasons for giving exactly those memories to Jonas.
Mind the tense in which you write (choose either present or past forms) and fon't forget about the 3rd pers. sg. -s in the present tense.
Here some more detailed help with one of your sentences:
I want to give him the chance to FEEL a little bit LIKE A child
By the way: Amazing pictures. I think it must have taken a lot of efford to put them into such a slideshow.
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